Saturday, December 1, 2007

fucking

fucking i love you
and i cant stop
no matter what i tell myself
in an ongoing argument
youre the one id kill for
die for
live for
take me just as i am
in everyway
own me please
i just want to serve you
and please you
appease you
because fucking i LOVE you
and love is not based on what you've done for me
but what i want to do for you
because this feeling inside is so
catastrophic
that i cant breathe unless i
ACT
fuck, just let me
let me love you
and love you like no one else ever will
i ask for NOTHING
and offer everything
just let me love you
adore you
in ways unfathomable to most
and know that its fucking real
and tangible
and unshaken
and unfuckingconditional
even when im wrecked
like right now
because fucking i love you

3 comments:

fight4rock said...

It was so abrasive. I love abrasive.
I think you're really getting in touch with more emotional work. I loved it.


.me.

MissHonor said...

i like this one...i imagine just screaming and crying...really gets the point across. The words not only are written, but I can almost feel each one punctuating, I almost feel like wincing..ya know? Good, very emotional and real

Isral DeBruin said...

I enjoyed this one.