Saturday, December 1, 2007

captive

captivated
elated
i know its been stated
but im overwhelmed
compelled
put under a spell
bursting
and thirsting
for a taste of this yearning
fulfilled
so thrilled
to know its for real
and forever
much better
than being alone
even apart
he stops my stuttering heart
with a sentence
dont end it
& til death ill defend it
its real
and i feel
his lovely appeal
to me
cant you see
he is just what i need
and im captured.

2 comments:

MissHonor said...

it took me a few times reading through this one for it to come together as a whole (not a bad thing, i'm just a blonde *wink*) I like it, it gives me a complete feeling, sort of like a reaffirmation of things

fight4rock said...

Okay, first off, fucking STOLE my random allocation of blog words to relate to the blog. You harlot.

And I thought it was interesting and fantastic. I think my favorite part (because i knew) was the "even apart" bit. The play on words was so fluid.


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