heaving
not breathing
fingers curling
arms attempting
to lift or hit
so heavy
not ready
its distant
but i feel it
you feeling me
kissing me
having me
while i lay there
wondering why
why cant i scream
or fight
eyelids wont lift
i feel you shift
and its done
but you dont stop
no no no
but nothing leaves me
crying
not dying
but wishing to
your hold
was like drowning
and i hate you
someday ill remember
how to breathe
4 comments:
ohhh
i almost
i shivered.
.me.
"never works"...
I wonder what was supposed to work with all that gloomy anyway.
whatever it is, never works indeed.
your last text sounds creepy
makes me hope to be child of inspiration.
Cheers
I agree. Creepy enough to weird me out.
And thanks for posting on my mates blog.
I'm going to keep an eye here, I like what I see.
Johnny Rumble
very dramatic...i loved it...i got the feeling like you're screaming but nothing was coming out.
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